Yellow Lolita

VIEW SECOND VERSION HERE!!!
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PLEASE TELL ME WHICH VERSION YOU LIKE MORE SO I CAN CHANGE IT!!!!

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LINE ART LOCATED HERE!!!
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(gust give me credit^^)

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Details:

I finally did a cute lolita outfit and the line art is wonderful. Yeah there are some mistakes ^^ (arm cough cough and some ruffles on the shirt

Anywho I wanted to make the coloring as simple as possible^^ I think I worked harder on the bg than I did on the actual base coloring^^

Oh and I love doing eyes!!!

VER1: well technically its ver 2 cause i saved it as that cause i was experimenting^^ I saw this person on deviantart (her link is located on teh pervious drawing) and i loved how she used screen tones on her colored art!
I tried it and well here its okay i guess but i can never pull it off like she does! I think its very vecotr like screen tone its one style i suppose^^

VER2: Very simple very shinny very shoujo I think XP Its simplicity makes it cute but I still cant decide which one is better


THATS WHY I NEED YOU TO TELL ME